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Then I seen you

So sure of which way I was going
Then I seen you
My way is now
Down into a spiral again

I thought I was so much stronger
Thought I knew which way I was going
Then I seen you
Thought I could look at you and be ok
But a flood of memories came back

Thought I could deal and still remain on my path
Yet images of what we could be doing
All the laughs i'm missing
From being away from you

I was so sure of which way I was going
Then I seen you
You still weaken my knees
A shame that you let me go
Because someone else picked up the pieces you left

He is where I am going
I see him and I remember
Why I'm not back with you
He fill my heart even when it's at it's lowest
I seen him
and I know

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