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So keep me up/But let me sleep

You're always  on my mind,
and I'm missing the sleep.
I need the energy
to waste on you, like I always do.

We've heard and seen it all,
we both loved every second,
every minute.
Magic.

As much as we pull away,
elastic bands always pull right back.
Even if the shape is not the same.
You have broken me ,
but not enough,
for this to stop.

So
keep me up,
so
keep me up,
so
keep me up.

I'll let these flowing fantasies of you and I,
swim through my mind,
above the surface, so free,
and under, we were trapped.

These dreams, an old reminder.

But
let me sleep,
but
let me sleep,
but
let me sleep.

Author notes

I will always need think about you, so keep me up.
I need energy, to be alive and do this, so let me sleep.


(I always write for myself)

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Comments

  • love the rhythm and flow of this and yeh sleep I wish I had more I have insomnia which is a sucker lol .... great write xx

  • luv2dream gold member
    April 19
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    i liked the rhythm of this poem...i can understand quite well.

  • I love this. Its the way love feels; spend all your time with me until I die of exaustion, but let me sleep so I can spend all my time with you. What a hell of a good way to put it. Nicely done.