Ditch the ads, upload images and much more - upgrade today from 5.95/month!
Read Contests Groups Learn Forums Store Help
 

Life

Being at the starting line for the rest of my life,
looking back on the road traveled and what is set ahead.
Not wanting to let go, but knowing that I'll be ok, pushes me on.
Walking the road less traveled, I try to let go of what held me captive.
Living and learning, I take the first step to a new life.

Author notes

This write is froma point in my past, that I tryed to tell my self for years was never as bad as it really was to hid what really went on. It was a battle with in my self to leave that life behind and move on and up... this is a look back on it years later.

What did you think

    : , Your review:

    Comment Suggestion: What is your your first impression?
    Line numbers  • Invite them to read
    : no Cost: 0 free left 0 points, You have (?)

Comments

1 - 11 of 11

  • AbundantBetrayals
    September 1

    Edit | Reply
    Well even though i don't know you i'm glad and proud that you made that decision, the biggest obstacle we must over come everday and in every moment is ourselves, people don't always realize this but i'm glad you did it means you know what it takes to go after what you want. Well done, love the words you have penned,
    ~Betrayals


  • ciara12
    May 26

    Edit | Reply
    Wowzaaaa!! sis this is amazing a i really like this one. It's so small but has so much more meaning then expected!!! amazing write!! Ciara

  • This was a beautiful reflection of the past, very profound. I really liked it Beautiful penning my friend!
    Blessings,
    ~Michaela~


  • Azgar
    April 28
    Edit | Reply
    I would have liked to read a longer version of this


  • Tqop
    April 27

    Edit | Reply

    A thousand applauds:

    Very lovely. I love this. Great delivery great job. I love how you expressed yourself and how honest you are. I can easily relate to this. It's very deep and lovely.

    Love,
    evemauy


  • Ez Writer silver member
    April 19

    Edit | Reply
    Rock solid penning that cascades
    in graceful movement ! A pleasure
    to read thank you ....
    Best wishes , Friend Easy


  • getjiggy28
    April 18

    Edit | Reply
    What doesn't break us...

    A lot of times the most significant writes are the ones written upon deep reflection, like this pearl here. A very powerful last line, which I found profoundly inspiring.

1 - 11 of 11