Fly free my little butterfly
With wings of blue and green
You need to escape away from hell
And the awful things you've seen
You know that they don't understand
All the damage that they've caused
The time of sweet dear innocence
There's so much that's been lost
Go now my loving butterfly
See all things that are new
They'll try to keep you away from me
But there's nothing they can do
Its all just fun and games to them
As though the pain, it isn't real
Treating you like a mechanical doll
An object that cannot feel
You're closer now, my butterfly
Your freedom's dead ahead
Don't give up, just keep on flying
You'll have time to rest your head
From your travels, I know you're weary
And you want to give up, I'm sure
But keep your trust and faith in me
I will help you with the cure
The shackles they threw upon you
I won't let them keep you down
Keep batting those wings, my butterfly
My love won't let you drown
You made it, my sweet little butterfly
The journey was long and rough
But I told you that you could do it
Yes your agony made you tough
So now you've gained your freedom
Do you know what you shall do?
That's right, my angelic butterfly
Anything your heart wants to
Author notes
Heh, I kind of wrote this about myself...and partly about my best friend Abby . I luv her dearly 
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Comments
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Yay!
I was sure cheering the butterfly on! Go butterfly!
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I love you, Rhi.
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Awe That was so sweet! I really love this poem. It was almost like god was talking or may be goddess. I loved this poem. I am adding it to the finalist list.
The Positives:
Great wording, and flow the ryhme is seamless.
The Negatives:
Nothing wrong that I see
My Favorite Part:
You made it, my sweet little butterfly
The journey was long and rough
But I told you that you could do it
Yes your agony made you tough
This was just wonderful I loved it.
Overall:
I give this an 9/10 you did great. I hope to see you in my future contests thanks so much for entering.
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i really like this poem
i think its cute
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