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Envy.

I envied you, I loved you.
I'd give anything to be with you.
That's why the only jewelry you wear now,
Is a Padlock.

Just to stand by your side
Fills me with such pride
Even if sometimes
The chains may break

They might not be that strong.
And they might say it's wrong.
But I'm keeping you forever,
I'm sorry.

So down here you'll lay.
Each and every day.
It may be dark,
But it's the only coffin I have.

You're bloody and bruised.
You feel so abused.
But I still love you,
It's like you didn't ever leave.

. . . Don't ask.

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  • This is quite original and has a relaxed, casual style that is most amusing when put in such stark contrast to the dark, psychotic content. I think you might have something worth developing here--hope to read more.


  • AshesFromFire
    April 17

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    Wow.....twisted, darling.
    That's all I've really got to say.
    Even if you said not too...I'm asking.
    Whats the story here?


    • xColumbinex
      April 17
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      There isn't one, I was just going through my drafts and I saw this one, I had forgotten about it and decided to finish it, I started it back in march.