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shadow child

shadow child recoils
shuts out intolerables
love waits with patience

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I teach autistic children.

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  • HatedLoveDieingRose
    April 20
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    wow

    very good!! very little words, but a big expression, and powerful! good job.


  • individuality gold member
    April 17

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    ah love, yes it can be kind and patient at times, when the mind walks a different path to what we 'class' as normal, but what is normal anyway! we are all individuals in a sea of souls, sometimes some rise above the waves in different ways.