I wander what you are thinking when I see you starring into space
Hearing all the questions that no one has ever thought of before you
Your a landmine easy to set of but if you do not bother you you are harmless
When mom walks away and you can't watch her leave or you'll sit and cry that brakes my heart.
You are my brother and Its hard to change for you but I will
not being able to kid around with you its hard for me
I am the Moon and your the Sun so very different but need each other to balance everything out.
Just no matter what know that we love you and care for you.
You are one of a kind and wouldn't trade you for anything and wouldn't change you for the world. We have our ups and downs with you but all we know is that your normal to us and we wouldn't have it any other way.
A contest entry
- AUTISM by HatedLoveDieingRose.
430 points, ended April 23, 8 entries
Silver trophy winner
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Comments
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Aw, great sincere write, love it baby
Love the metaphor "I am the moon and your the sun" and this "Your a landmine easy to set"
Your brother is pretty cool. Though he did hit my butt I think the last time I saw him when we were playing Mario Kart.
You know I always spell check and point out any grammar mistakes:
"wander" should be "wonder"
"starring" should be "staring"
"Your" should be "You're"- as in you are. (it is in there more than once)
Other than that baby, well deserved silver.
Love you.
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hahah yea he didn't mean to smack ur butt..lol =] ily
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It was still a what the hell moment though.
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This is a great poem you wrote regarding your brother! Congratulations on the silver trophy you won, well deserved as I can see this was written from your heart. My son was born with autism.
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thanks for checking out my poem =]
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You display a hard-won gift, the ability to love another as they are, and to appreciate them, even when they are not always easy to deal with.
It is also impressive, that you have chosen to step up to harnessing what is easy and comfortable for you ("kidding around") to make things easier for your brother. He is lucky to have such a sister!
Outstanding "hearing all the questions that no one else has ever thought of before." Congrats on the silver!
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thanks =] glad you enjoyed it..im his brother though =] lol
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lol Sorry 'bout that! Should have stuck with "sibling" I guess!
He's lucky to have such a brother as you, and there's a lifetime to learn from one another. Best wishes to you both!
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aww
well said! i love this poem.. Good Luck!
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