Vapors of existence as clouds fading,
some filled with anger
and explode with rage.
While others float peaceful.
Together all will vanish
into the realm of nothingness.
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CONGRADULATIONS ON THE GOLD
very zen, like the word itself, matter and nothingness how thin the line well done
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good
i like it alot one thing maybe you could find a different word then nothingness its kinda just thrown in there but its really good and nothingness is a great word to describe it so your right there and you have an awesome idea the only thing is nothingness doesnt really fit but again this little short poem is awesome
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