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serpent skin

some half hours I find myself
drowning in the shower
clutching the cross around my neck
like it's the only thing
keeping my head above water
and my scales intact

 

rolling around in pomegranate seeds
my fingers are slimy slugs
and my veins are so heavy
with a vicious disposition
that hath not faded
through fifty thousand pleasant conversations
and a million forced smiles
that have rightly scarred lines into my face
after every trite summer
biting my peppered tongue in front of your mother
for your sake

it only took me this long
to see I am mostly made of hair




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  • you've got some splainin to do

  • tara. how do you feel about religion/god/the supernatural? you mention things like that a lot in some of your writing and i was wondering what your ideas were. this is an amazing poem

  • sorry forget to press spell check! they are fixed now.


  • hilly
    April 17

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    I sort of wish that instead of "to know I am mostly..." it would be "to see I am mostly..." but those are really incredible lines regardless. seriously, I can't tell you how great they are.
    the first two and last two lines are my favorites. but yes, fix the typos. this is nice.


  • the atlantic
    April 17
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    i love this. typos? fix ya?

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