My promise is to be with thee,
in troubles, joy, and agony,
come take my hand, we'll be a while,
this journey lasts a thousand miles.
Author notes
WIth a wish of a happy life for Michael Savage and Angel Bellerose!!!
A contest entry
- Our Wedding Reception by MichaelSavage.
900 points, ended April 18, 15 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please your critical suggetion and comments.
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awesome!
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nice one bro.
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What a darling write. I liked reading it very much! Keep penning my friend!
Safely hidden in the darkness,
~ The Rocker Who Lost All -
der ha bhai der ha
very nice but too short
dah lag lwe ka no dera maza bha uki tek da
bahar hall i appreciate u -
nice liked it
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I really liked your poem!
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Nice little quatrain. You used commas well, and it would fit in well with any thoughtful poem about marriage and its meaning. There's emotion in the words "I promise"...the joy and agony of love. Nice ending. It's just the beginning.
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Beautiful, lovely sentiments for a friend in deed. I like it and I wish it was longer but I'm sure the happy couple will like it as well. Great job my friend.
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Thank you. Nice poem is such short words.
Michael
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GOOD JOB
well said , its a great poem .
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Nice words in form of a poem. I like it.
Jake
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that's pretty.
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Title, Marrige, should be marriage.
just delete my comments if you like. 
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