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Love is Like a Rose

Love is like a rose,
Beautiful in its prime
But over time,
It starts to wilt
The petals seem to drop off
And in the end
All your left with
Is a memory of what once was.

Author notes

Once again, mitchell wraps himself around me soul and tugs at my heartstrings.

A contest entry

One of my weird analagies as I go through depression...

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  • Phantom-Phanatic
    September 15
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    that's amazing. sweet and short and way too true.


  • DemonicChanel420
    April 25
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    This is very beautiful, and so true. Great job and good luck in the contest!

    ~Chanel Renee'


  • Maggie Kay gold member
    April 17
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    This is great short but clear. A touching piece beautifully written
    keep it up