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Cross Stitch of Nature { Gold }

Missing image

Coolness of white linen,

drapes elegant..

Warming sun's bronze

glistening curls in her hair.

 

Cobbles pathways..,

sleepy slopes meld into the distance,

as did the gentle murmurs of the every rippling tides

turning upon foam pebbles.

 

Transparency of thoughts,

lightly reflective,

imagery of creative stills,

foil filmed in cartridges.

 

Patchwork quilted summer meadows,

fragrances sweetly demure,

elegance of hues create tapestry,

each petal silkens thread.

 

 

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The above print by painter Steve Hanks called "Coastline"

60 to 80 words

A contest entry

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  • darlee77 gold member
    October 24
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    Very elegant and creative. Definitely fits the picture. I like it. God bless.


  • Sandra R Reynolds gold member
    October 16
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    beautiful flow of words and imagery


  • individuality gold member
    May 14

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    a good piece of poetry penned with excitement and with grace and flair, nicely written, a penning to be proud of.




  • perfectsunset gold member
    May 11

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    Wow sis, I am not surprised
    you won gold, because this
    piece truly deserves it..
    and I knew it from the
    very first line.

    You always carry the reader
    into such beautiful labyrinth
    of words... and it's a soothing
    feeling

    I know to read your poems
    like this, when I am having
    a stressful day.. this eases me

    Congrats sis, loved this



    xx


  • michael thomas gold member
    May 1
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    a poem of beauty so well done.


  • Rose Angel gold member
    April 29

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    Such a vivid take on the prompt! You have involved our senses with your textures of fabric, warmth of bronze tanned skin, cobblestone pathways, sound of rippling tides,"imagery of creative stills, foil filled cartridges" Ongoing is your skill in this write...Indeed most impressive to we the readers...Best of luck in the contest!


  • daviscth silver member
    April 17

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    What a beautiful picture and your imagery has breathed life into it sis. I enjoyed this one very much. Good luck in the contest.


  • Swan song gold member
    April 17
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    Sigh!!!!! This was beyond words!


  • maralisa silver member
    April 17

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    aw sis a very beautiful write for the image promt your soft imagery is wonderful throughoutgood luck in the contest sis

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