Eyes closed, lips touching
time stands still..
butterfly's float,
my soft touches possess you
you are now under
my love spell
Author notes
Prompt: 21 words on magic
A contest entry
- Quickie....5 poets 10 minutes to pen 21 amazing words by islekine.
520 points, ended April 17, 6 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Amazing write. Short and very sweet. Keep up the great writing! Major kudos to you on this!
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And love spells are difficult, if not impossible to break!
I appreciate the clarity in this. In other words, it's not too bogged down with explanaton.
Peace Georgia
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a good piece, ah the spell of love, it grabs us all and feathers us with smiles then kicks us in the teeth
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A sweet write. To the point but I didn 't feel rushed, but felt the natural cadence of the tender moment. Well done. Bravo--Encore--Author!.
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Gives one a chill, a nice romantic feel to it.
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nice
i missed your work so much! congrats on the shiny!
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I really enjoyed this...
Thanks so very much for entering! Best wishes in the contest and always! Write on!
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A lot of imagery and emotion packed into 21
well chosen words--
-Very Creative and imaginative--Well done & good luck in the contest!
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Magic in these words indeed...
A very shaweet write, well done!!!
Ken
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Love the take on the prompt! Lovely!!
best wishes,
Khia
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