Thoughts of mine, catch wind of you. Once in a while. As they race through at a thousand miles an hour. About the same speed the wind you bring, blew into my life. Surprise' surprise, destiny will always rule our live's. Inside a windy storm our love was bred, where every circumstance was a threat. yet your words became poetry, suddenly the storm was nothing more than a cool breez. I believed the curents of your wings would carry me,so i let the wind blow where it may. The same wind that filled these very lungs, in the end the wind would blow on and leave these lungs empty. Breezy wind, ever so fimiliour to me like a shady friend. Wind blows where it wishs,the discription of what cold never be retained. I find myself seaching for the wind as if i could see it litterally. But its just that it has so much more meaning now to me. Though i know i will never see it, let alone understand the way it came. The wind keeps me breathing, just so i could release deep sighs. Hope you know that every tear i refuse to cry, i never wanted to say good by. Who am i to fight? you and i where born to die.I beleive once we choose to grasp that we could begain life. Though death reigns over me, in the shadows of what I regret to be. All the wind in the wolrd could never fill these lungs with storms like unto huricane,like the tormented winds your lonely breath brings.
A contest entry
- ANYTHING GOES!! PIF by Jade.Butterfly.
2000 points, ended April 23, 47 entries
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WOW, A beautifully composed poem. Brought tears to my eyes. I saw this poem in it's esscence this very moment. But does it have to end like your poems always do? Our dreams a distant fading memory of a special time and place that could never exist? I'm no longer your very best friend?
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I liked this piece,
But if i may suggest breaking it up into stanzas?
I think it would flow alot better.
Though this was great piece.
i enjoyed it.
good luck, thanks for entering -
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This is a most interesting poem to read; I have a couple suggestions though mate -
the layout of this is a little confusing, perhaps you might like to add some spaces between stanzas
& you have a few minor spelling errors so you may like to run this through a quick spell check
All in all, Excellent write
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