She smiled with Cheshire's greetings
and laughed, capturing the bird's song
as she waved away admirers.
Her mango scented suncream
& Golden plaited dress reflected ripples,
from glass water to nearby pond.
Her sunflower skin was sensitive;
photophobic flashes in front of her face,
each breeze a blessing from beyond
she dances with nothing but her heart on.
Author notes
15/150
Saturdays. 
Colour :: Gold
Scent :: Mango
Season/Month :: June
Name :: Amber
Strange, but ehh...
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Comments
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Aww I loved this!
Especially that last line
"she dances with nothing but her heart on"
--Wow, that is truly unique
and so beautifully laid out.
This was such a great
take on the prompt.
Best of luck & thanks for entering
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Her mango scented suncream
& Golden plaited dress reflected ripples,
from glass water to nearby pond.
-I really like the way that is descriptive. it makes me smile =]
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