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Sombrero Solar



She smiled with Cheshire's greetings
and laughed, capturing the bird's song
as she waved away admirers.

Her mango scented suncream
& Golden plaited dress reflected ripples,
from glass water to nearby pond.

Her sunflower skin was sensitive;
photophobic flashes in front of her face,
each breeze a blessing from beyond

she dances with nothing but her heart on.

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Saturdays.



Colour :: Gold
Scent :: Mango
Season/Month :: June
Name :: Amber



Strange, but ehh...

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  • Aww I loved this!
    Especially that last line
    "she dances with nothing but her heart on"

    --Wow, that is truly unique
    and so beautifully laid out.

    This was such a great
    take on the prompt.

    Best of luck & thanks for entering

  • Her mango scented suncream
    & Golden plaited dress reflected ripples,
    from glass water to nearby pond.
    -I really like the way that is descriptive. it makes me smile =]