Is it over
can it be?
i cant help but look back at my memory
soccer games
and silly dances
all the boys who gave me glances
the noises from up above
cant forget of all the love
assisgned seats
so no one cheats
running to the lunch line
still illgal to drink whine
friends forever they'll never be gone
some wacked high school wanna take them BRING IT ON
im not losing them
And dontf orget of the nice student teahcer...Ms. M
our lives arnt done here
we've got another year
but thats not enough i fear
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Lots of misspelled words in here. Looks like typos if anything, but use the built in spell check! Other than that, it was pretty good.
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I love it
this poem really hits home for me
I really cant wait to leave sometimes
but yet I fear I'm still a child and I'm not readdy to be on my own yet -
awww i love it. you should have put this on ms.m's poster toooo
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its not really about ms. M she just kinda rhymed with "them"
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haha well still i like it
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thank you very much sherlock appreciates it
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haha anytime sherlock anytime
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WOOOO BOYFRIEND IS RIGHT IM GOING TO PORTLAND WOOOO
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shes going to portlanddd.
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AWE... This kind of made me a little sad.
High school is such a great adventure and you obviously enjoy this time and are making the most of it.
Beautiful!
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I forgotted the clappys
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Yay! Are you going to Deering or Portland? (Or Cheverus or McAuley or somewhere else?)
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