Do you feel her fiery heat
Raging inside this darkness
A wounded soul, lost again
Ghosts of a past gone by
Overwhelming memories
Now haunt her waking dream
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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very mysterious and eerie...i like it! keep on writing...maybe make it a little longer next time...peace an dlight, kp
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so few words put in the right place to make them as powerful as can be...this poem drew me in and even though there were not many words it was very powerful.


