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Ghosts of a Past Gone By

Do you feel her fiery heat

Raging inside this darkness

A wounded soul, lost again

Ghosts of a past gone by

Overwhelming memories

Now haunt her waking dream

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  • Kendal Palmer gold member
    May 12, 2009

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    very mysterious and eerie...i like it! keep on writing...maybe make it a little longer next time...peace an dlight, kp


  • life.love.tears.
    April 16, 2009

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    so few words put in the right place to make them as powerful as can be...this poem drew me in and even though there were not many words it was very powerful.