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Fearful

What vile disgusting twitter of heat
Doth choke at me and make me sick?
Like a twisted line of Byronic prose
Wrapped in thorns and rusted needles,
My heart is torn like a piece of meat
In the Lion’s jaws.

Author notes

I made a word up. I think. If there is a word like Byronic, then well, fuckety fuck fuck. Otherwise? Work it out for yourself.

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  • OldBear34 silver member
    April 16

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    Good Write

    "My heart is torn like a piece of meat In the Lion's jaws." is a great closing line. Like the rest, too!