Blood red world
Guilt unstained
Blurring image
Trip insane
Moments of darkness
Flickering light
Hope departs up
In quivering fright
A twist to the turn
New life learned
Upside down, turned around
Life of agony
Dreamless… sleepless nights
Days full of wonder
A haze of life
Turning to thunder
Storm of emotion
Not one of them true
Sadness inside
Deep… blue
Nothing new
Anger boiling
Trying to scream
Let go, emotion burst
Fire burn, light in eye
Quick to scream, quick to cry
Thoughts of leaving
Thoughts of dawn
Time draws near
Yet stand still
Thoughts of darkness
Thoughts of light
Try to keep the hold tight
Losing grip, losing hope
Flash of dawn… flash gone
Memories fade all things erased
Moment of thunder…
Flash of light oh so bright
Falling… under
Twirling down
Darkness around
A home we know
Dajavou…
Poetry soothing
Easing the fall
Words tumbling round
Waiting… waiting… waiting
This could last forever
Momentary lapse
To far in pen moved on
Before brain can begin
Many things left unsaid
Back to darkness
Known so long
Evil… no
Saving souls taking hold
It’s another chance
To change the coarse
See the light guided
By those who have gone before
Watching silence waiting silence
It go’s on
Blood red world
Guilt unstained
Life maimed
The trip insane
Picture… color
Disappear
Life’s a blur
Heats breaking
Tearing apart
Time to chose a path
But it’s unknown
Hollow… mind a blur
Things never understood
Words on and on
Flashing as fast as eye can see
Falling forever safety unknown
The end unknown
Inside left empty
But a mind fast at work
Keeping pen steady as lines work
Little notes across the page
Deeper meaning than one knows
Twisted words like twisted world
Truth never known
World go’s on
Author notes
this is about the longest poem I have ever written later I may add more lol
idk just came to me
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loved it
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Sometimes the work that just flows through the pen from within make the best writes, and I think this is one of those times indeed, keep up the good works, it's nice to see you on a roll.
All my best, your ap Daddio~
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cool kiddo. it's really great i'm pretty much speachless love u.
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i like it dark angel if you want to add more that would be FUN! * giggels* i miss you.
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Dajavou…?
No idea what that word is...other than that good poem...love the length...keep it up
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This comes at you like a blast of water, it reads like falling over a cliff and getting hit by rocks jutting out on the way down. Its exhausting and exhilarating at the same time. The short lines crank up the pace and keep it there... well done
Cyber Artist
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I am going yo take this as a complement and says thanks because well i wanted it to be fast paced exhausting exhilarating and keep the reader entertained while i got out emotion
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.... oh so true
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thanks for reading it i have my better moments and I believe this poem is one of those moments probably the best I have ever written about the longest to
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