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Wheres Alice?

Once upon a time there was a girl...
a beautiful girl named Alice...
She had blonde hair, blue eyes.
She was a dreamer, all day long all she did was dream.
One day she fell asleep by aa small stream and was woken up by a strange, white rabbit, 
She follows the rabbit and he leads her down a hole,
she falls down,
Gravity melts away as she begins to float in midair,
She soon finds herself lightly touching the ground,
She looks around and finds herself in an incredible new world she had never seen before, even her her dreams.
Colors and patterns spiraled and swirled,
Every single plant, tree and creature all breathed in a harmonious rhythem as though they were inhibited by some magical spirit.
Nothing was proportional or logical,
Nothing was what it seemed to be..
She soon settled in this new Wonderland, making friends with cats and catapillars and having tea parties with mad hatters.
She found comfort in the unusual,
unconventional, undescribable.
She embraced the color and beauty that were so grey and absent in her regular life. Whenever she slept she dreamt of normal things, and was always delighted to wake back up in the tospy turvey world...

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  • Manda Kathryn Greeters member
    April 16
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    Welcome to AllPoetry

    Alice always has adventures of some kind doesn't she - I like this adventure of hers; though due to the use of f--k I'm going to have to ask you to label this as Adult, or change the word ... I'll be back to check

    Excellent poem
    Keep writing!

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    ~Manda
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  • kacie marie
    April 16
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    I really liked that.