"I love you."
Those were the last words you said to me.
as
I walked out the door.
You told me you were sorry,
That it'd never happen again.
But i knew it was lies,
Because thats what you said last time.
I just want you to know,
I wont be returning,
The cheating has to stop,
I cant take this anymore,
After all is done.
turns out your just a whore.
Author notes
Prompt: Breaking up
Pic: http://jonix.deviantart.com/art/Heartbroken-02-78224963
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Powerful image in pic
Just today where I volunteer posting suicide prevention and other help information... A young lady was saying her boyfriend broke up with her because she didn't love herself enough or have enough confidence. I told her that it wouldn't be a bad think to build up her confidence and love herself more for our longest relationship is with oneself. I told her I'd read that guys prefer confident women... and that she wasn't alone and many of us had felt her pain of a break up.
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I have felt the same way in a relationship. It's really sad to lose somebody like that, but it also makes you a stronger person. It gives you a sense of power that you never knew you had before, to be able to just walk away.
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what a powerful punch in the end... This feels heartfelt on some level... I sense the pain. Many have endured this yet you have stated it in simplicity. Love it...
becca
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haha okay, take your time, i'm not gonna rush with the judging, i'm so lazy. lol
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