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The Wolf

With bronze eyes ablaze

Leaping into the morning haze

Teeth piercing deep

A scavenger tearing at meat

 

With frothy fangs abare

 Leaving bellows in the balmy air

Claws barring withdraw

A quarry fighting its fall

 

With sated stomach full

 Strutting as if a Spanish bull

Eyes veiling surprise

A glut saying no goodbyes

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  • jjtochrist
    April 19
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    awesome!

    this pulls me right into the animal that is described perfectly by your words of expression! awesome poem.

  • Lainie
    April 16
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    Thank you for the nice comment. I just signed on yesterday and am still learning how this whole system works. I decided to remove that it was unfinished because after reading it again, it actually does feel complete


  • Jasmine Rayne
    April 16

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    I really like this piece. How descriptive it is without you saying exactly what creature you're discussing save for the title. I love pieces like that.

    "With frothy fangs abare

    Leaving bellows in the balmy air"

    That's my favourite part. Great job on this [even though it says it's unfinished]. You really have some talent.









    -Jaz♥