I swallowed another taste of misery;
I drunk to my life ending, for it always lacked love
and left me feeling armless, in a cut up world.
I found my way to the bottle - you didn't pass it to me.
I found my way to the marijuna - you didn't even ask me.
I found my way to deception, by allowing myself to breathe...
This is my final temptation and I can only blame...
... Me
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357) Lead us not into temptation. I can find it myself.
Trust me, I know the way myself. Although others like helping me.
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unfortuately there are not enough entries so i am deleting this cotnest. i am sending you points for participating and am wondering if it is still ok to use your wirte for the book? if so, email me at viyannaschance@yahoo.com. thank you and sorry about the contest.
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This is my final temptation and I can only blame...
... Me
wow, i loved that line. sad. -
awsome like noma;
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OOh this is so miserable. The first line is amazing and everything else seems to be darkened. What a great poem.
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Wow.... Simply wow.
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your option number is suppose to be listed with the title as per the rules. this way i can easily see if one option is being used too often and remove it. thank you for your entry and i wish you the best of luck in this contest. can you please fix the title? soon? viyanna rosemarie
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Wow I really liked this!!!
The emotion and the envirement are both painted so clearly.
GREAT JOB!!!
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Sad!
This is so sad. I like it good job.
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