Gossip spreads,
Lies are told,
Truth is lost,
Smiles fade,
Feelings are hurt,
Tears of sadness,
No one listens to the truth,
Nobody cares about the truth.
Author notes
Yes, I wrote this poem on my shoe during gym thats why it is called Shoe's poem.
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I wonder how you wrote all that one your shoe!
Well done i liked reading this very much so
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Hmm....Intresting. You wrote the poem ON your shoe. This is Very true But some of us still care about the turth. Very Nice poem bravo.
Thanks for the Entry/
Kathryn -
Love the title! I would remove the commas to improve the flow and make the grammar hounds twitch.
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i love this poem, its simple but cute. and its true too.
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GOD SOOOOOOOOOO TRUE!
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There are some of us that do care about the truth! But I agree there are alot that don't. Good poem. I must say I've never written a poem on my shoe!
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a good poem, ah who says we need paper or modern technology to create, when we have to, we use whatever is at hand to express the self.
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