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For You

I wrote a song for you;
I forgot the words.

I baked a cake for you;
It was over-cooked.

I painted a picture of you;
It looked like my grandma.

I planted flowers for you;
They wilted in the sun.

I bought candies for you;
I got hungry.

I walked to your house;
You weren't home.

I named a star after you;
It was a comet.

I wrote a poem for you;
Did I do good?

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