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ode to a cigarette

oh sweet stick of white
in your box you sit
and your smile so reassuring
the tiny letters on your belt
spell out words of comfort
i clutch you small delicate frame
so careful not to squeeze to hard
for fear that you may break
you sit between my lips
so perfectly you fit
the lighter in my hand
awaiting to ignite your tip
the burn fills my mouth
and moves steadily to my chest
the warmth of your smoke
fills me up
and every exhale is sweet
i lick my lips
and breathe your substance in
but like everything that is good
you are not good for me
and it pains me to think
that i must give you up someday
but for now sweet cigarette

give me your nicotine core
and float me away

Author notes

i don't actually smoke guys....

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  • and your smile so reassuring
    the tiny letters on your belt
    spell out words of comfort
    i clutch you small delicate frame
    so careful not to squeeze to hard
    for fear that you may break
    you sit between my lips


    This part of your poem was so cute and very well said. I found it to be interesting and what a unique ode you have done. I thank you for entering the contest and best of luck to you. kahy


  • higherlove
    April 16

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    wow this is a really good poem. i like it a lot, i do smoke but i am quiting and its really hard not to want the urge to light one up!! so if u dont smoke then why write this poem??


    • HannahBo
      April 16
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      Why thank you
      i used to smoke like a lot. i guess that sould say "i dont smoke any more" haha