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Love Makes the World Go Round

You wrote the dance of my life,
From beginning to the end, eternal friend...
Love makes the world go round,
Hearts beat together in life's orchestra.

Children grow up in an ever changing world,
They need to be nurtured in order to grow.
Love makes the world go round,
Hearts beat together in life's orchestra.

We all make choices, good or bad,
Opportunities to take, lessons to be learned.
Love makes the world go round,
Hearts beat together in life's orchestra.

The dance goes on throughout generations,
Hopes and dreams of better times,
The Word of Truth to guide us.

You wrote the dance of my life,
From beginning to the end, eternal friend...
Love makes the world go round,
Hearts beat together in life's orchestra!

Author notes

harriet567
Inspired by quote: "O God! You created love, making us busy in its immortal dance...' Unknown

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Comments

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  • AutumnGypsy gold member
    September 24

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    This is a good piece with an excellent message, slightly over the line count but I will let it go this time as it's only one line. please adhere to the rules where possible. There weren't many of them. Thanks. best to you in the contest


  • foreveryourslove
    August 30
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    nice....


  • Paladin of Light
    July 17
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    i like your inspiration and the poem flows well best of luck


  • LittleMoon silver member
    April 19

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    Congratulations on the well deserved gold for your lovely write. Sheila


  • Blue-Rose Beauty gold member
    April 19
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    Good message.

    • harriet567
      April 23
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      Thanks for your comment and for the contest! Best wishes, Harriet.


  • PrabhuDayal Khattar silver member
    April 19

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    I love the message here which is not only the sweetest of its base and its truth but as well as quite universal touch is here..well done..

    • harriet567
      April 19
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      Thank you SOOOOOO SO MUCH for the Gold Trophy! Thanks for the contest. God bless you, Harriet


  • Treasure 5 gold member
    April 16

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    Good luck in the contest you truly have a great write This is wonderfully written and it was a great pleasure.

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