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Hatred

Darkness envelops the world,
covers the sun,
      the moon,
stars go dark...

End of the world?
Apocalypse?

Could this be it?

This is the end,
black sun comes to retrieve its posession...
It's nothing but a black hole
twarting the life out of the world,
ending all hopes of survival,
killing all dreams of a continuance...

No
life as we once knew it
is ruined
ended
forever........





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For national poetry month...

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  • FyreFox
    April 17
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    wth?

    What was your issue today? I think your forcing your poetry too much jen.


    • LaVieBohemme
      April 17
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      not really forcing it... this came to me in the middle of precal yesterday... except the title...that was forced...


  • A. Rose
    April 16
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    Coolcoolcoolcoolcool. i like it!