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Moving on like the sun

sun rise sun setts
things change we move on
life is good while it last


i've seen so many broken faces
yours, theres, mine too...
i've known so many broken hearts

the nights begin to fade to gray as dawn breaks across the sky
i stare out across the green grass and i remember

as the sun rises as the sun sets we move on with our lives
it's the only way to truly cope with life as we know it

how i feel right now...

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  • kitty23
    May 1

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    great
    lots of emotion... who's this about?

    Just want to know whats going on with you.
    I keep trying to get a hold of you but nothing.
    Im leaving for awhile i don't know how long i think it will be a while though im going to go to job core.

    well love always,
    caitlyn.


  • Remix Factory
    April 30

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    very heartfelt as i began to read it kept me keep on goin till the end, like the imagery and the words its jus takes you to that feeling and the last 2 lines were so true , 'its the only way to truly cope with life' nicely done

    - Remix Factory


  • Ez Writer silver member
    April 29

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    Splendid !!

    A touching & heartfelt Poem
    pleasing & graceful in its flow
    Throughout !! A pleasure to
    read - Indeed !!
    Best wishes , Friend Easy