The world is new,Fresh fallen snow
Stretched out ahead of you
A place to learn and love and grow
Where hopes and dreams come true
The journey's only just begun
Reach out, and sculpt your world
Love and live beneath the sun
A flower, not quite unfurled
And may the wishes sent today
Guide you,safely on your way
Author notes
Happy Birthday Noor 
In a list
A contest entry
- Happy Birthday HIKARI LADY by mcope8050.
1400 points, ended April 20, 3 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Awwww!! I didn't see this before... it's so cute, thanks sweetheart.
Love
~Noor
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returning the favor
nicely done \ i've read this before,,.lol,,, haven't I?,,
enjoyed it AGAIN,,, the imagery is as fine as i've EVER read,,, -
how stunning this is and how fitting to our detined meeting
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You write such beautiful poetry, and it always is a pleasure to read stuff from you, be it dark or light. Your poems always captivate, and your words here speak to all of us, or at least to those of us who appreciate such words of beauty. Thanks for sharing and take care.
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Very nice
this is beautifull,,, the imagery was great and the message conveyed,,, um PERFECT,,, thanks for you entry,,,
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You can write some pretty stuff when you want to dear. This is nice without being mushy, or as I like to say,"Hallmarky"
Peace
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writing sumthing fr sumone hs always made me at awe of the power f poetry...excellent write up sis...
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