security floods the senses
shrouded in silken warmth
surreal imaginings encapsulate
sloughing, shedding
given fledgling wings
renewed spirit
I become
A contest entry
- 30-40 words of brilliance #63 by Aussie Gypsy.
550 points, ended April 28, 18 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
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aaa, a most wonderful and unique take on the emergence of the final stage of lepadoptera! I really did enjoy this short but incisive poem!!
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this is beautiful i love the line "shrouded in silken warmth" x
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i become, that is nice i enjooyed the read take care
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This is beautifully penned. Short and sweet and says it all.
Brilliant
Way to go......
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I must say that even with the brevity of what is presented here, I found this to be a delightful read. You brought true meaning to your words. Keep that quill handy and ever ready for use!
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I love the beauty and softness of this piece, you captured love and made even the sadness seem beautiful. Best to you in the contest
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I’m so happy it could be so; that you emerge from the darkness into the warmth of my arms…
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Good luck in the contest you have a wonderful write here. It was a pleasure to read your poem.
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is the word fledling meant to be fledgling?
I love butterflies and I think you have captured their essence well in this short poem. your choice of background picture is beautiful and helps set the tone for the images contained withing. thank you for sharing. peace to you always in all ways...
-Kendal
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A small poem that packed a bit punch, good job. Even though it was short, you packed so much imagery into it that can not be done with some longer poems. I applaud you and good luck in the contest!
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Superb Plus +
I love this write with its incredible imagery. You expressed your thoughts quite well. Thanks for sharing this one with us.
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