There’s nothing
But distance and time
Between us.
This Love pulling
And pushing the stars
Together and apart.
Indefinable matter
Moving in all directions
All at once.
Unseen, unknown,
Unexplainable.
A wonder and awe
So very vast and
Completely incomprehensible.
No way to grasp it
Yet impossible to let go.
Flowing through the ether
Forever flowering
In a wild,
Eternal,
Early spring,
This Love
Only continues
To grow.
Rain falls,
Pouring
From the windows
Of this soul.
The unmarried widow
Weeps
Clearly,
Deeply longing
For a Love
Passed long ago.
From sunlight
To moonlight
Again, and again
Reflections and reveries
Reveal
There is nothing,
Not even distance
Or time
That outruns
Or outlasts
Our Love.
Author notes
A rare (thankfully) sleepless night. It is now 7:41 a.m. - and I have yet to retire for the "evening". I think I should do that now, especially since it's daylight out.
Please tell me what you think
Comments
1 - 20 of 20
-
YOU STIRRED UP SOME COSMIC STARDUST WITH THIS BEAUTIFUL PIECE, TO SAY THE LEAST!
From sunlight
To moonlight
Again, and again
Reflections and reveries
Reveal
There is nothing,
Not even distance
Or time
That outruns
Or outlasts
Our Love.
The perfect ending to a mystical, magical, celestial, heartfelt, and soulful piece that fit your AP name to a T. Well done, Baby! This may very well be an older piece but it is a keeper, indeed. Thanks for giving me the heads up to this one which had me stargazing and feeling as light as a feather floating down from Heaven from a sweet and sensual angels wing.
Love & Peace!
Earl.
-
Now, this poem is made of pure stardust. -c
-
WOW!
Oh my gosh this is an amazing and strong filled emotions poured into this piece! I love this line:
Rain falls,
Pouring
From the windows
Of this soul.
The unmarried widow
Weeps
Clearly,
Deeply longing
For a Love
Passed long ago.~
that is some deep,deep raw emotions of how exactly it is to feel of losing someone that you loved so deep. Great penning!! Thanks for sharing!
-
Beautifull Words
This is such a wonderful poem. Seems like it was created by the heart, and I suppose I'm not mistaken? Such a wonderful piece that can enchant a reader's eye, and maybe heart? Lovely, absolutely lovely! -
The poem was a great one but I would suggest a different way of setting it on the page. it seemed a bit broken up in how it was placed on the page; other than that, great write.. the words are very moving
-
Amazing...
-
Your sleepless night was worth such an effort. Very thoughtfully evocative piece. I like the line, "there's nothing but distance and time." So true.
-
Absolutely Enchanting!
This piece takes your breath away as it takes you on a wondrous journey through time and space and even love. Muchas Gracias!
-
I know these feelings. You spoke right to my heart, I could really relate. The flow of your write is incredible! "There isnothing, not even distance or time that outruns or outlasts our love." I love this! Congratulations on the Spotlight! Very much deserved!
-
This is really a beautiful piece of writing. I think it touches everyone's heart. I really don't know what to say but that this is one of the lovely poems that I ever read so far on here. Great job
! Love and Peace!
-Jess
-
beautiful
I love the title...simply sounds right for the poem....I love the lines....This Love pulling
And pushing the stars
Together and apart
this shows great imagination and thought to meI I also love the lines
Rain falls,
Pouring
From the windows
Of this soul.
The unmarried widow
Weeps
Clearly,
Deeply longing
For a Love
Passed long ago.
..this evokes such a strong reaction in me of pain ,regret,and obvious longing..it touches my heart -
You have a beautiful command of language, which is a key component of poetry. In addition, you have a poet's heart.... sensitive,sensuous and romantic with a touch of the mystic added for good measure. All the elements that add up to great talent, which you have in abundance.
Good work!!!!
Drybones
-
-
Remembering what I've seen upon your pages, that comment you left means a great deal. Thank you SO much!
-
-
this is the best piece i have ever read besides the work from rockchick 93 which is my favorite it is amazing i feel that all my wnders have been understood
-
-
Wow, thanks for such a lovely comment!
-
-
Nice work !
-
Beautiful
Honestly, i wish i could write like you. Lovely. -
I do believe that this is honestly one of the BEST pieces I have ever read with such feelings. I can relate to this one so much so that it could have been poured from my soul by your pen; it hits that close to home for me. I would not touch a word of this it is perfect.
-
-
I am so touched by all of the comments, but yours especially, Gypsy. I've Admired You for a lonnnnng time now!
Thank You So Much for the terrific Influence and Teacher you continue to have and Be! (That sounds somewhat backwards, but kind-of right/karmic too, so I'll leave it.)
ya All~Ways,
~ Jan ~ -
Thank you dear. I *like* it too.
-
Adding your comment:
1 - 20 of 20
