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closing the book of you

you stuff your ears with arrogance
hear naught but the echo of your own opinion
see
only the things your own mind creates
and believe
only what you see

outside of you
perhaps we'll really meet
some day?

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  • AutumnGypsy gold member
    April 28

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    Now this is a fantastic way of interpreting the prompt, I enjoyed the direction you took this in. Well done. Best to you in the contest