Huddled in your old jumper,
with the hole in the armpit,
I wish I was you, so I could rip my heart out of the sleeves.
You used to call me beautiful,
to the point of belief,
then even you stopped the dreaming,
and saw my tepid skin.
I used to be thin and my hair used to be soft,
now I'm all milk and straw,
wrapped in bales of liquor.
I think you thought it cute, when I got drunk,
and went to Narnia,
but as I clean vomit off your floor,
you put on your jumper and you walk out the door.
I wish I hadn't looked, at the porn on your computer,
Girls don't look that way,
but boy I bet you wish I did.
I wish I was you, so I could call me pretty,
and lie through my teeth,
but I would see a smile.
I used to have good legs, and my smile was much brighter,
now I'm all trunks and pickets,
fenced in spliff soaked fingers.
Once you called me beautiful
I almost believed you
Author notes
hmm i dislike this. I also dislike women who don't look like women. I think hair extensions and plastic surgery should be banned its ridiculous.
Please tell me what you think
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"now I'm all trunks and pickets,
fenced in spliff soaked fingers"
loveee that.
yeah i feel like this too. v much so. people shouldn't be so fake and ORANGE also... though i don't mind hair extensions... obviously as i used to wear them! lol, but not when all massiveee with lots of make-up and shit.
bleurgh. i hate girls. i hate people. we all knew that.
however, i like this muchly
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mm one thing though
"but as I clean vomit off your floor,
you put on your jumper and you walk out the door."
kinda sounds like you meant it to rhyme... and it'd be a bad rhyme. maybe ' you put on your jumper and walk away' or 'out the room' idk...
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hahaha but stealing people's hair extensions is always hilarious! I actually haven't done it but I've heard a story :]]]] very giggle worthy. oh and speaking of plastic surgery, there's this woman who has a gallon worth of silicon in each of her breasts. she's boobzilla! ahhhh! I mean, I enjoy my boobs and all but geezzzzzz, is is really necessary to make them that bigh?
this piece made me feel so icky, like this whole piece was directed at me. it makes me want to cover up and sit in a shitty corner and pick at all the split ends in my hair in an attempt to make myself look "pretty" or something like that. I mean, it's good that it makes me feel this way because it's intense and just twists itself into the reader.
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Well I enjoyed it, very interesting to look through the eyes of a women looking through the eyes of a man. Very interesting indeed. Please feel free to read and comment on my works as well. Thank you
Rabbit
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