Sizzling sun...sinks
flames fade
Scorched ground sprinkle
weathered, beaten
ashen remnants
Leaving holes
in rocks
in souls
Phoenix rises
breathing new life into new days
Fears relieved
Dreams renewed
More tomorrows
to be made.
Author notes
MOT!!! I was thinking of you,,,us....our "tomorrows"
Can you see, think, feel this? A Correlation...hmmmm
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Flouescent
Great imagery with a positive and hopeful feel. Thanks for the thoughts and words.
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Hope.. is the central idea I get from this
funny how the form appears like it is
struggling to be centered
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Fantastic, as usual !!!!!!!!! I love your work!!!!! Sorry I've not visited in a while, I've had family illness and difficulties abounding...... Love the format, too!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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This was wonderful! Enriched with imagery and emotions. Excellent work you little poet!
~Tia
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Cheers to Tomorrows!!!! 'Ours'
Now this is what poetry is all about. You know the reasons why this poem and picture is oh sooooo special to me...I love it!..I love you! Keep your muse going sweetie. You have "it"!!!
MOT
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The day comes to its end and the cycle starts all over again. Something old, something new, ...
We recreate what we know ( definition of insanity, "Doing the same thing over and over again, expecting a different result." )
You are correct about the past, it always takes a little from us. We are less, unless we create more.
LIfe is not what we keep, but how largely we share.
Love,
Tom B.
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My you have many more tomorrows. This is done quite well. I enjoy the optimisum you bring with this poem, Nicely done!
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dat o.kay u cool?
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Thank god for those tomorrows...
sighs. I felt like I was the one standing there looking and renewing. Thanks. Very very nice hon.
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ohh these things we feel anew
air crisp...flowers bloom
birds sing with sunlight bursting
come hopeful are the hearts
to loves fountain with a thirsting
woooooochie... hows you cutie?
mal
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beautiful! this is the poetry that most people think of when they think of poetry...romantic and full of passion...thank you for sharing...peace to you always in all ways...
-Kendal
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