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  • going nowhere
    May 24

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    an acrostic! whoa... i missed TWO from like a month ago??? very nice, i liked the title like... to introduce love. clever you.


    oh, oh, oh... is it like opening up bit by bit... until the whole world knows? i dont know... or maybe like.. good news travels fast?

    and unlike blue skies, i dont think love is ewww. i think it's beautiful.


  • walking in the rain
    April 27

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    for once, i would have to agree with my dorky brother you should definitely be writing more poetry

    Great write!


  • Blue Skies and Pain
    April 20

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    like the computer operating system?? opening lots of them?? ...... k.. that was stupid...

    glad to see a new poem!!!!!! ... even if it is about love.. eww.. lol..

    actually.. i think you should write more happy poems like this one!!!!!!!