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Midas

So close I can touch it
If i do I lose it all
How can this feeling
Be so far away?
How can believing
Be so hard to take?

I will rise
Under chains that
Close the door

          (I will rise)
          (Under chains that)
          (Bind the world)

Set me free
From this curse of gold
Won't you please
Let me see before I'm old

I can't compromise
The conclusions I
Always come to find
When I analyze

I will rise
Under chains that
Close the door

          (I will rise)
          (Under chains that)
          (Bind the world)

Come to me
My fleeting feeling
Stay with me
So we can see!

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