Rain dropping from the black abyss
we call the sky,
dark clouds over cast
what is called the colorful state.
Falling on my wind shield
wiped away by thin blades,
caught by the asphalt
only to be driven over countless times.
The beauty of it all though
appears after the rain falls.
Beauty in radient colors
all put together to form a rainbow.
Beauty though ive heard
is in the eye of the beholder...
With that being said
can rain be beautiful?
It falls with grace
and brings the color to whats dead.
To me a rainbow is beautiful
but its the rain that really makes
the beauty of the earth stand out.
Author notes
I was just writing something... not to sure where i was going with this... constructive critisism would be helpful. Hope you like it though
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this is beautyful and so true
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thank you. I love the rain, and i love the beauty that it brings out in the earth... I guess its the simple things in life that are the most beautiful
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I think it's awesome and that you've wrote something very meaningful and power and deep. keep up the awesome work. the only suggestion that I have for you is instead of "window shield" just keep it at wind shield. Keep up the excellent work. I hope things are going well for you.
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Thank you for the wonderful comment, i am very glad you liked it. Im doing wonderful, trying to take everything one day at a time and looking more so at the positive side. Hope your doing good. Thank you again.
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