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~Let your Glory Fall~

 

 

The music softly

plays, eyes closed and my

heart reaching for the heavens

on resurrection day.

 

 

confessions and gratitude

poured without hesitation

for the lamb of God and His

blood for all the nation.

 

 

 

and only then do I feel your

presence around me, showing

me your peace I can depend on;

it sustains all understanding

 

 

 

my hands raised in adoration

thoughts rush through my mind,

how blessed I am with you in my

life.

 

 

 

And when I sing your praises

I know without a doubt, you are

with me, Your spirit shows me

visions and prophecies.

 

 

 

a warmth spreads

through out, as your spirit falls

tongues spoken, tears released.

we your people are dropped to

our knees.

 

 

 

Oh Lord let your glory fall.

 

 

Rend: The Veil

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Blessings

 

Rend

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  • Eric Marsh
    June 20

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    i cant read poetry

    you may think it strange but my background is in criminology and psychology, so have been trained and have taught people to find the truth, behind the words. i have no knowledge of the poetic form
    so i dont really read the words i somehow feel what is behind the word, i can feel the colour and shape of the words....so when i read this it jumps out and tells me that your love of god is strong and true..i know it sounds crazy but i feel a poem as one feels musics in that you dont have be a musician to feel the passion within the music..lol..i'm confusing myself now.it is astonishingly difficult to explain...i feel that this poem is passionate and true and that your love god is the most important thing in your life......i am unable to give any opinion about the words or the way they are structured, i dont know how....thus i cannot tell you how you can improve something which exist as an objective content of the thought which gave birth to the poem...oh dear pass me a shovel i seem to be digger myself deeper here.....you love of god is real, so real that god is actually an objective content of you subjective thought therefore god is real.....phew..i need a cuppa....soory if this does help....eric

  • drapedindarkness
    June 13

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    Soft Love

    Such peaceful serenity
    Flowing through each line
    It almost makes me wonder
    Are you touched by the divine


  • Blue Rew silver member
    May 4

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    Tranquility is given voice in this gentle
    piece of spiritual communion. I especially
    liked the ending stanza along with the single
    line that incorporates the title so well. Blue


  • Cup-a-Joe
    May 2

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    Beautiful imagery thruout this, but what i love nost is the last line.
    ~Oh Lord let your glory fall.~
    This is a daily prayer.

    Joe


  • Denerica
    April 23

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    This is not only asking for peace but it is tranquil in itself, That is the message in many of our hearts to cry out to him...let your glory fall! Wonderful worship in this write. Thanks for entering. Blessings.


    • Rend the Veil gold member
      April 23
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      thank you so much for your

      comment, and thank you for such a awesome contest
      Blessings

      Rend


  • Heath Thompson
    April 21

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    Rend - this is class. Love this:and only then do I feel your

    presence around me, showing

    me your peace I can depend on;

    it sustains all understanding

    and the part about prophecy etc wow! I'm with you on this


    • Rend the Veil gold member
      April 22
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      thank you for your comment

      I am blessed by your support and encouragement

      Blessings

      Rend


  • white stone
    April 20

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    Wow... Rend the Veil , like really really rend the veil. I love the teachings of Christ. So peaceful and far seeing, so ahead of his time, so ahead of our time. I love how he crosses lines of gender and social stature, spreading love as the greatest commandment.

    • Rend the Veil gold member
      April 20
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      yes like really Rend The Veil

      My first one true love, who loves me and all He wants is my sin...
      and for me to love all mankind ..thank you so much for commenting,
      i am blessed

      R


  • Rose Angel gold member
    April 20

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    Your adoration and surrender penned throughout this moving write, tells us all how you are so open to the Lord..Such an inspirationally telling penning telling us of who you are as a woman of God...Loved it!.. Mom


  • Jake Summers
    April 18
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    Hi Rend,
    this is very nice...love what you said here and so true.
    Jake


    • Rend the Veil gold member
      April 18
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      Hey Jake,

      its always nice when you stop and comment
      thank you my friend

      Blessings

      Rend

  • A-muse-in-writer
    April 17

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    Wow

    may I sum this up in one word? Amen

    Thank you for the great pleasure of reading this message of faith.


  • poppa
    April 17

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    beautiful write Rend... shows the strength of your heart and your faith... wish I had your level of faith. but I look around and I cant help but question why "he" doesnt do more.

    • Rend the Veil gold member
      April 18
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      Rob,

      I know what that feels like... we have to stop thinking about
      what life has done to us, and start living for HIM, thank you my SweetRob,
      you have always been a blessing

      Rend


  • DolceVito gold member
    April 17
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    Excellent spiritual, Rend, beautifully done

    • Rend the Veil gold member
      April 18
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      Hey Vito,

      you surly are a trusted sweet friend, and I am glad
      to know that you are always here to give me encouragement

      blessings

      Rend


  • thepoetssoul
    April 17

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    This is an exellent penning, filled with a great message, God is always their
    thanks for sharing your heart and spirit.
    Be blessed in all you do.

    Tony


    • Rend the Veil gold member
      April 18
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      thank you my sweet friend,

      I am always blessed to read your words of encouragement

      Blessings

      Rend

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