hearts afloat on riverbeds
made of softly woven silk;
while feathers glide upon wings of glory
and smiles break in unison
we'll entwine like drops of wax
down the candle of life
before the flames die
and our spirits harden
In a list
A contest entry
- IMAGERY - Prewrites Welcome by Heavens Child.
575 points, ended April 20, 30 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - prewrite conest by serenity silvermoon.
1500 points, ended June 12, 429 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - In search of inspiration! by RestlessDreamer.
700 points, ended June 27, 134 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
soo....whats your honest opinion?
Comments
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excellent~
Beautiful
Love the imagery in the poem
Congrats on the Honorable Mention
Hugs
Susan~~~
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Wow, I love the image of the candle. Even though it's short you develop it so well. Very well done. Best wishes and thank you for entering.
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Wow, you are really writing some excellent imagery lately, love the candle idea, clever, well written write. Blessings.
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awww Well done and this is worthy of a gold, so if it is not in a competition, go and put it in one somewhere and get the trophy this deserves little sister.
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