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I Love You

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I love you, I love you
and I love you
the words sink in
like music on a line
spoken from the heart
you set my spirit on fire
open the door
sweet words and come inside
dance on my soul
make merry my mind
you are my love
raptured in space and time
wrap your arms around me
let me bask in your sunshine
fly with me as my desires come alive
captured in your beauty
your grace and love Devine
hold me close 
until the end of time
love me like no other
thank God I am your wife


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Oh my sweetheart! I love you, I love you and I love you...Unknown.

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  • guardianhost gold member
    November 14

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    Throughout all ages

    Love speaks eternally !!! A dedicated write , well done!!
    I loved it!!!


    • AngelBellerose gold member
      November 14
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      thank you so much Sis for this honor i am humbled always.. this is one of my first poem that i wrote I had not been on hear a month I laways loves this little girl and boy ..made me feel so warm in heart hugs always hun so much love you ♥♥


  • rinzurajan
    June 27
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    WOW...LOVELY DEDICATION...SIMPLE AND BEAUTIFUL...

    GOOD LUCK

  • Humm..quite pretty and awesome magic ..here showing the love around..thanks for sharing such a warm poetry..


  • moaner
    April 19

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    beautiful! im someone that will say so if i dont like anything (nicely of course) but so far, all this stuff is music to my ears. im loving all the styles ive seen so far x


  • applehead326
    April 16
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    I have goose bumps, this is awesome!


  • penman gold member
    April 16
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    Excellent

    Aww such a terrific and loving write. You did great with this one. Best of luck in the contest.


  • klassy lassy
    April 15

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    what grand chorus of sweet refrain
    that tumble windfalls of pleasure and pain
    together that last beyond lifetimes apart
    for it radiates ever the embrace of heart.

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