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Reflective Puddles

The rain has fallen
And puddles lay scattered
Across the streets
And the land

The Puddles are reflective
And reflect the sky
And all that is above them
In the little water they hold

The crystal clear water
Reflects all it see's
Hiding its depth
Underneath itself

The puddles instead of being a nuisance
When reflecting become
But a thing of beauty
With rippiling water

People step in
And abuse the puddles
Reflective beauty
And all it holds

Another 1am poem with writers block.

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  • Sunkissed xo
    May 8

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    incredible once again.
    wow. you're definitely on your way to becoming one of allpoetry's next top poets


  • Addicus
    May 4

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    I SEE THAT EVERY TIME I SEE A PUDDLE!!!!

    I'm glade I'm not the only one because I was saying that to one of my friends and they looked at me like I was crazy.


  • pain is love.
    May 2
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    Nice. Interesting creative way to use puddles. I like your style. Keep writing!


  • trekkergirl
    May 1

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    interstering never thought of puddles as being reflective of the sky but I guess that they could be. Very preseptive view of the world here. Thanks for sharing this with us.


  • txchick
    April 26
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    Very Nice.
    I like how you used puddles.
    Good work =)

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