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Floral Intellect

Collect the thoughts of a Crocus
The Hyacinths talk for hours
Apple Blossoms keep their focus
Philosophize with the flowers

Tulips speak as their name implies
When cognitive thought devours
The Lily Of The Valley, never cries
Philosophize with the flowers

Lilacs agree with Daffodils
Their debating never sours
Altercations with them, gives me chills
Philosophize with the flowers

Collect the thoughts of a Crocus
Philosophize with the flowers

 

 

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  • Summer52
    April 26

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    Oh, Just WOW!

    I will try to make a Kyrielle Sonnet....
    You are really an amazing creature, my friend!

    WONDERFUL WRITE! I love this sonnet.


    summer51


  • Perfect10
    April 26
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    Not enough lilies, I love lilies!

  • Judith Chandler
    April 23

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    An excellent write, flawless in flow and rhythm and rhyme.

    Thank you for entering my contest.


  • Emmyb gold member
    April 20

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    Loved the theme youve chosen here.
    Really enjoyed your repetition again here.
    Very well written, thoughtful and clever


    Emma


  • Pisces Pieces
    April 17

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    Wow, what do I say! You have given the flowers much more personality and life than they already have. An appreciatation of their existence on a deeper level

    You already know that I think you are such a gifted poet. Your talent is amazing.
    You could create a beautiful, original...and formed...piece out of just about anything. It's awesome!

    ♥


  • Ken-Maverick
    April 17

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    "Philosophize with the flowers"
    That is a very profound line dudette!!
    Your sonnets are always penned shaweetly,
    where as mine are still iffy if. Much to learn I have.
    Best to you in the contest

    Ken♣


  • Pure Thought silver member
    April 16

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    I really am envious of your skill, you take a word bank and mold it into a thing of beauty, with no stilted feeling at all. Just magnificent


  • soulfultia gold member
    April 16

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    The lines in this danced for me You paint a beautiful picture with words Missy I really enjoyed this piece ~Tia


  • DesolatELifE
    April 16

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    What exactly is a 'Kyrielle Sonnet'?

    Very nicely written. I like crocuses a lot. Nice images.


  • MJ Donnelly gold member
    April 16

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    Aww, how cute!

    All the best hun,
    Love ya!

    mj.


  • Griswold silver member
    April 16

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    Very beautifully written,
    Took a stroll through your garden of Eden,
    the colors so blindingly beautiful.
    Transported to summertime in Sweden,
    the imagery is incomparable.

    Kyrielle Sonnet in such perfect form,
    the Queen knocks another out of the park.
    Using all the words, quite out of the norm,
    no wonder the interest that your writes spark.

    An old grizzled poet sitting in awe,
    in wonder at the work of art he just saw.




  • Firequeen
    April 16

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    Another amazing write dear
    this one made me feel as though i was standing in a feild of beautiful flowers
    listening to them sing as they sway in the wind
    beautiful
    Keep the ink flowing
    fire


  • JohnnyD gold member
    April 16

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    Ahhhhhhhh....excellence once more.....no wonder you are the Cubbie of me eye! I love flowers as well-right now my entire property is either flowering or leafing out and the baby quail (Bobbers) and bunnies are spotted here and there amongst the butterflies and hummingbirds.

    great job!

    love,

    Dad


  • Legend silver member
    April 16

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    I am never less than amazed when i click on your work. Everything seems so easy for you.No matter the subject matter, you have the words to cover it in such a wonderful way.
    How do you manage it while dancing
    Excellent


  • poet2angels gold member
    April 16
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    I adore flowers and this is a garden of beautiful ones to savor...
    Just so lovely

    Lynda


  • Mairi bheag gold member
    April 16
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    This is a little gem, Sis.


  • Cup-a-Joe
    April 16

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    Now I am pondering about ponsetta's.
    I love how you do what you do.

    Joe


  • maralisa silver member
    April 16

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    a wonderful write amera I love how you have brought the promt to life with depth throughout good luck in the contestmaralisa


  • Daizee silver member
    April 15

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    If that came from a word bank...wow!
    I thought you were just paying homeage to the beauty of flowers, which you did wonderfully

    Love,
    Stacy


  • paulcreates silver member
    April 15

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    For some reason this reminds me of Alice in Wonderland.
    Interesting entry. I wouldn't have guessed it was a word bank contest. Good luck in the contest.
    Paul


  • PassionsPromise gold member
    April 15
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    wonderfully penned. As always


    Good luck

    Passions


  • cricketjeff gold member
    April 15

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    Beautifully done

    I bloom therefore I am as Rosie Dandelion put it.

    In one of the many forms you almost appear to own.

    Superb
    Jeff

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