You hurt the ones that mean the most
breaking hearts and taking lives
make them suffer and make them cry
soon they go and when they're gone
put six feet under
but, not before they're left to suffer
just left as soil and made to rot
if Gods so great than why is life so tough
Dedicated to someone who I don't know personally but is a dear friend of someone close to me...
Please tell me what you think
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I get what you mean. Me, being an atheist, doesn't believe that there's a god, but if you do, then maybe take some things into your own hands. Try and make your own life happy, don't wait for "god". Great write though!
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Good
The harder life is,the better you become, this life is a test to see if you ready for the next one. I thought this was passionate . very well written piece, Enjoyable, There were no errors. No typo's and nothing to change as far as i can see. I look forward to your next one Alexander QQ...
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I agree. Y is life so tough?
I like this. Its really good.
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