So sick of being known
so sick of her body no longer a mystery
so sick of invisible hands of truth
snaking their way across her.
She wants to be the secret that's never told
to be wrapped up in herself
and forgotten,
swallowed down, hard and cold
and still in the peace of disacknowledgment
Author notes
I don't know what more to do with this...I don't know that it's complete, but I don't know what else to add. So I'm just leaving it. I just need to think up a title.
Comments
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As I read this I constantly thought of the word 'misfit'...i dunno know, perhaps it's the way you described the situation. A person in a place that she doesn't wish to be, it's like she can't fit into the world around her...so in a sense she becomes the misfit because no one knows what she says in her mind.
Also, I believe you should leave this as it is because it is an expression of some very strong emotions.
All the best,
Perry L. Earles


