One Tab, two tab, three tab, four
just enough to escape dull the pain.
One slice, two slice, three slice, four
just deep enough to escape dull the pain.
One Tab, two tab, three tab, four
more than enough to escape this hell
One slice, two slice, three slice, four
more than enough to escape this hell
One Tab, two tab, three tab, four
hallucinating away the memory of "him"
One slice, two slice, three slice, four
bleeding away the memory of "him"
One Tab, two tab, three tab, four
I'm starting to realize that...
One slice, two slice, three slice, four
I'm starting to realize that...
One Tab, two tab, three tab, four
is not all that necessary to forget
One slice, two slice, three slice, four
is not all that necessary to forget
Author notes
Prompt: Write a poem inspired by drug addiction. Write a poem inspired by cutting.
What did you think
Comments
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I like it. I understand where it's coming from, especially the need to get rid of the memory of 'him'. Great write.
x x x
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Good job on this. I liked the repitition in it. I do that a lot in my poems, so I like reading it in other people's too!
Thanks for entering, and good luck!
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i prefer thinking as an escape because its not really an escape.
xD
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