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Strength Together

Love, stronger than a nuclear war;
nothing can destroy us together
handling boisterous winds,
riding it like a feather.

Love, it is forever.

Author notes

Dedicated to Kenneth J. Cabeen.
He inspires all my love & strength.

A contest entry

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  • ToxicSuicide
    April 19

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    I'm sorry, this contest is only for poems that were in part one of Give Me Anything, I'm going to have to remove it. Nice poetry though.
    ~ToxicSuicide.


  • acari27 gold member
    April 17
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    very simple but quite lovely-both the writing and the content


  • guitarbowler6
    April 15
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    aww ily