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Surrender

The sins ... (our sins)
The grief ... (our grief)
The BURDEN (our burden)

ALL laid on Him.
Because He loved us enough to surrender
His will, His comfort..
To instead, show us grace...

Can't we surrender, too?

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  • lowercase prelude gold member
    May 18

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    Beautifully spoken words
    And you end it with a very powerful question that, for many, is hard to answer.


  • Treasure 5 gold member
    April 15

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    Wow you said a lot in a short and swet poem. This is wonderfully written and it is very much a pleasure to read your poem.


  • Spiritual Poet gold member
    April 15

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    wow

    Good job Monica. You ask an amazing question. Wonderful write in just a few words. God bless you, love you lots, Daddy


    • No.Longer.Bleeding
      April 18
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      thank you, daddy I was at an Easter Vigil when I wrote that and the words came from God.

      Monica <3

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