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I'm Not Her

I'm sorry I'm not her.
I'm sorry I can't be there,
When you should be here.
I know I left,
But I'll never stop,
Loving you with all my heart.

You and I had our times,
Both good and bad,
But we got through them all.

So here we stand,
I'm reaching for your hand,
But you're reaching for hers.

I guess, we are truely over,
When you are happy with her,
And I'm holding back tears,
That I can't let you see.

I'm sorry I'm not her,
And that I can't be anyone, but me!

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  • Gigglegasm gold member
    May 4

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    This is a really heartfelt write. The sense of rejection is very strong, wonderfully portrayed.

    Thanks for entering.
    Good luck.

    Michelle


  • Rend the Veil gold member
    April 15

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    great take on the prompt!

    you penned all the possiablitys of rejection feels
    and all the mind thoughts that go through our head,
    well done

    Blessings

    Rend


  • hisaddiction
    April 15
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    great job with this!