hearts peak of rupture,
to moments wished to capture.
two souls torn apart,
left to be lonely hearts.
how many more dusk falls,
until seeing each other again.
Author notes
Word prompt: Seperation & my title 
A contest entry
- Word Prompt (#21) by Gigglegasm.
625 points, ended May 11, 13 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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This is a wonderful, succint piece and you've painted such a brilliant image of separation.
Thanks for entering.
Good luck.
Michelle
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I am still waiting
you penned a loss, and it was done with such sadness
Blessings
Rend
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very nice write i love it you did a great job with so few words i love it keep up the great work...
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